good to weave in commodity, firmness, and delight toward the end. mostly descriptive passage, but with some powerful vocabulary that strays toward analysis. be more intentional and focused about your essay to take a position about the pantheon's meaning in the larger context of roman society. use the title to direct your work....suggest a conceptual frame.
good to weave in commodity, firmness, and delight toward the end. mostly descriptive passage, but with some powerful vocabulary that strays toward analysis. be more intentional and focused about your essay to take a position about the pantheon's meaning in the larger context of roman society. use the title to direct your work....suggest a conceptual frame.
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